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A Perfect Gentleman

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It wasn't anything I thought would be
The first time that we met
When Spring caressed the blooms & budding tree,
When I felt so alive, and yet

The way it was as he came down the street,
I held my beating breath,
The jacaranda petals 'neath my feet
Foretold a distant time, of death.

'Twas when he stepped before me, it was plain.
He took me by surprise,
But not just with a waist coat, gloves & cane;
Was that a smile behind those eyes?

A subtle manner equal to its bliss
That took my hand in flight.
His lips, to bow, to meet it with a kiss
And sudden brought the callous night.

Who's whispers of his voice became a roar
Within my startled head,
That dominated ev'rywhere it tore;
'Twas like the devil, from the dead.

And deepest depths he took me 'low my will,
To breach my ev'ry ban
That woke me where I endless slept, and still
He was a perfect gentleman.
This piece is written with the syllable count of 10/6/10/8 per 4-line stanza, and a rhyme scheme of a/b/a/b per 4-line stanza.

April 12th from the NaPoWriMo 2017 which I posted a week's worth of entries each week of that month for a total of 30 poems.  Now for those who had their favorites as did I, I'll be posting many of them individually through the month of May to show them to better advantage.  I hope you enjoy!
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ShinyScribe's avatar
Such an elegant way of speaking. Your choice of words really is tantalizing. :)