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Abandoned

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The stuff of stars never settles;
coming together, then pulling asunder

to drift, to join the ever-quickening race
towards obscurity while being observed.

I walk through cavernous concrete
pathways between skyscrapers,

standing abreast against their self-made
micro-climate, trying to confuse the wind

in my own obscurity, passing
through me like a mental sieve

made of atoms that out-number the
dark matter of abandoned eons.
I personally call how I've written this piece, as "free fall", which I've done a number of times when writing many of my pieces. Thank you for stopping by for a read.
© 2015 - 2024 Jade-Pandora
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NemoX7's avatar
Another stunning piece to stumble upon. Really beautiful. :3