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You saw a gray mouse today
in the form of a girl
pickin' her way, skittering through
the trail of alley apples.
On her mannequin’s body
wracked by a smoker's cough,
wrappings of newspaper headlines
held fast with twine.
Ticker tape judders from
the fortune cookie
between her thighs,
but don't stare too long
cause you might see the
ink blot of two profiles.
That is,
if she still gets her periods.
And if she holds still
long enough, her eyes will
show you the mania. But she's
studying you right back.
And the scab-engers of her arms
are more chaos than you can handle,
so don’t be square just standin' there
playin' air sex...
WHACK!
in the form of a girl
pickin' her way, skittering through
the trail of alley apples.
On her mannequin’s body
wracked by a smoker's cough,
wrappings of newspaper headlines
held fast with twine.
Ticker tape judders from
the fortune cookie
between her thighs,
but don't stare too long
cause you might see the
ink blot of two profiles.
That is,
if she still gets her periods.
And if she holds still
long enough, her eyes will
show you the mania. But she's
studying you right back.
And the scab-engers of her arms
are more chaos than you can handle,
so don’t be square just standin' there
playin' air sex...
WHACK!
Literature
A Liquid State
It's raining
hard,
just outside
the window,
pleading
to get in
as the people
on the
roads are
soaking
running
covering
their heads;
protecting
the water
in their bodies
from the water
in the rain.
Literature
a brief visit extended
California returns
painting
panting
portraits of love
etched in endless steps
and slanted streets
stretching sunburnt limbs
its languid strides
like solemn hymns
collapsed breathless
in the grass
'round
Grace Cathedral
it finds hope
secondhand
(but still potent)
its thrift shop moments
making
better use
of battered truths
than those intended
it makes belief
not makes believe
that nothing's ended
Literature
Whitewash
I am buying some tea
in a glass bottle
on a college campus.
Nobody is here after
7pm, not even the
monsters.
Me,
them-
our collective
loneliness.
Everyone wants to
get in their cars
and find home.
There is
lots of waiting.
An old friend passes me
on the stairs.
We make jokes
about our
disappointment.
Hell is a quiet place.
The silver token bottle cap
clings,
then bends.
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The piece went through a number of spills and scrubs. Halfway through its metamorphosis, John `RetroZombie said it sounded like a beat poem. It was a great idea to flesh it out like something someone like Kerouac might've written. Based on that, I rewrote and tweaked several more times till it turned out like what you see and read now. I hope readers of it will enjoy, and if any of you aren't familiar with the styles of beat, or of Kerouac, it's easy to google some examples of where it all came from.
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....Now I want to read some Kerouac thanks to this.
Excellent!
Excellent!