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Coming up from Aswan with his catch,
he tacks the course of his dhow
along the Nile of her dark eyes,
her long hair,
the narcotic of blue water lilies,

her lotus pose facing both
the rising, and the setting sun,

the young fisherman begs to know
as he sings upward with his might
and his desire, into the sail
that catches the crosswind--

What is your name, scented one,
in the smoke that rises
from the shores of the cataracts,
where I bring to you my bounty!

He peers into the azure above,
waiting for her answer to fill his sail,
calling out once more as his teeth gleam--
Ma huwa 'ismuki?
:iconjade-pandora:
الأزرق لوتس blue lotus
Ma huwa 'ismuki? = What is your name? (f)

:bulletblue:The second of two entries submitted for the #Word-Smiths's Colors Poetry Contest [link]

:bulletred:10/8/12: added a beautiful preview piece with the help and skill of `RetroZombie Thank you so much, John!
:bulletorange: And the image used as the preview piece is thanks to "blue lotus" by *moa810

:bulletpurple:2/27/13: Featured here: [link]
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:iconlittlemoonboots:
this is absolutely beautiful. the diction of this blew me away.
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:iconjade-pandora:
gosh thank you so much - how you've honored me!
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:iconpoetries:
'the Nile of her dark eyes' and 'the narcotic of blue water lilies' are my favourite parts of this piece. Great diction! :clap:
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:iconjade-pandora:
That means a lot to me of course, but also because I've always enjoyed this particular piece. It was a strong visual, animated and with such sound within my head, so writing it was a real joy. :hug:
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*SMAdams Feb 27, 2013  Student Writer
A level of simplicity and beauty dancing together in rhythm.

Wonderful! :heart:
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:iconjade-pandora:
correction:

Ah thank you so very much, Shara, for sharing such lovely appreciation with me! :heart:
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*SMAdams Mar 10, 2013  Student Writer
You are most welcome! :) :hug:
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*rlkirkland Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Searching and holding a desirable beauty.
Withstands repeated readings Jade. :rose:
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