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Corset

surprise! for the man
I can't get enough of-
a cinched corset
of butter-yellow leather
making my hips
wider than they are-

no room left for air,
its bone and sinew
replaces my own,
the stocking top
ostrich trim tickles-

don't be fooled lover,
lying back, head cradled;
or is it I who will be,
my talent packaged thus:
we'll have fun finding out-

riding crop in hand
facing away, I ease on,
straddling you
for a rigorous canter-
you knew I would

and when I think I've
bested you in your intrigue,
and those muffled moans,
you pull the laces tighter
till I flutter and swoon
©2009 `jade-pandora
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:bulletred: 05/18/09: featured [link]

surprise! pour l'homme que
je ne peux pas obtenir assez-
le port d'un corset-sangle
de beurre jaune cuir
si serré, il rend mes hanches
semblent plus large qu'ils ne le sont

avec pas de place à gauche de l'air
de ses os et le tendon se
substitue à celle de ma propre,
le stockage haut
autruche trim chatouille

ne soyez pas dupes, amant,
couché dos avec la tête bercée;
ou est-ce moi qui sera
avec mon talent donc emballés:
quel plaisir nous aurons à trouver des-

avec cravache à la main
Loin et je fais face à la facilité,
à cheval sur vous
d'une rigoureuse galop
la façon dont vous savais que je-

et comme je pense que j'ai battu
dans votre intrigue,
attestée par des gémissements étouffés,
vous tirez sur le renforcement des lacets
jusqu'à ce que je flutter et faible

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:iconjeffreymcc:
... and I thought you were fucking sexy before you started in on the French....
The poem is fluid and beautiful
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:faint:

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giggles. I just loved it. Though I love to know what you wrote in the message box I think I got some of it but all. But what I did get was just beautiful.

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:icondreamsinstatic:
Beautifully written, very sensual.

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:iconetienneell:
c'est magnifique! :glomp:

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etienne ell
:iconjade-pandora:
ah, Merci, frère de chaînes! :hug:

but say... pas de favoris pour moi? :blushes:

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:iconjade-pandora:
ohhh merci bien!

It's been a long time since I've seen you as well. Did you read from my journal what happened recently?

Anyway... pas de favoris pour moi?

Just being couqettish. :eyes:

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:iconjade-pandora:
*purrsss & taps the soles of your feet with the crop as you lie prostrate* :eyes:

Votre maîtresse attend :heart:

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:iconjade-pandora:
Merci beaucoup, Steven - vous êtes très aimable. Je vous remercie de votre appréciation, et pour le favori!

(Thank you so much, Steven - you are most kind. I am grateful for the appreciation, and for the fave!)

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:icondreamsinstatic:
Even when written, French seems so pretty :)

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