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"Exile"


The sound of her voice was
his music, mute of syllables
singing of his banishment
from the grace of her words.
  
He gathered sleep from the
shadows of her breasts,
keeping himself to a dark niche
within reach of her perfume.

Keeping her in his sight
he wondered
as he began to pleasure;
when had she known?  

He imagined a
much younger time when
she could extract
milk from the stars,

when she first offered a cup
to his lips, trembling from
kneeling on the cold foyer tiles
of her regal domicile.

Now, there he was
reduced to a vicarious act
though the sight of her
uplifted him-

the upward spiral of
pale smoke from
the snuffed candles
by her adorned bed...

never taking his
quartz eyes off her
and her fertility
was all the adornment he desired;

he, a pebble in the garden
needed no pillows or curtains.
His nostrils filled with her-
was it narcissus, or osmanthus?

All he knew from that moment when
the agony of his passion ignited,
was hearing her voice sing
the song of his exquisite exile.
©2009 `jade-pandora
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:iconretrozombie:
I am beyond words...

:+favelove:

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玉: 我的天使 ♥
Always look on the bright side... there's more light there and it's easier to find stuff.
:iconretrozombie:
:+favlove:

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玉: 我的天使 ♥
Always look on the bright side... there's more light there and it's easier to find stuff.
:icondogmatickerr:
Masterful... the title and the subject matter match so perfectly, that alone is quite beautiful - the rest borders on the divine. Private pleasures and wonderment - deepening fascination and adoration, this is gorgeous. The way that he thinks is amazing and so very alone.

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Loveless
:iconrottenpeeches:
wow... so elegant and dark.

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"Don't poison everything."
Saul Bellow.
:iconjade-pandora:
thank you, dear Rae, I'm honored that you think so :heart:

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:iconjade-pandora:
there is so much of it that goes beyond

:heart:

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:iconjade-pandora:
I've been a bit speechless ever since I saw this comment from you --

I'm terribly moved by your perception - which is beautiful. All I can say for now is... thank you.

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:icondogmatickerr:
:giggle: I do not know why you are so effected miss, but I am glad you are. Beside, you should know how much this would resonate with me, considering... :giggle: But it is beautiful - it's sensual and sexual, deep and just... wow but in such an incredibly, pointedly, terribly different way than anything else you've written - and not just that, but anything I've ever read :faint:

As beautiful as my perception is, I must say that your writing is infinitely more so - your vision and imagination.

You're welcome :)

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Loveless
:iconluandrei:
I'm loving this from start to end! ♥ :+fav:

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A.C.A.M

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