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My second entry for ~moyanII's visual poetry contest where she has asked for submissions of haijins' journals, notes - something to show their handwritten haiku work.

You see one of my working poetry journals opened to "Shibari Haiku Renga" [link]

Shibari Haiku Renga

1
bindings creak
my weight settles-
spring rain

2
ropes braid
my limbs-
spider's web

3
immobile-
a watchful
fawn

4
suspended
shadow on the wall-
a sapling's quiver

5
mental
timelessness-
herons take flight

6
crescent moon-
the rope master's
work of art


~moyanII's sensei wrote the following haiku with description about my second entry - I love it and am terribly honored:

Haiku Field Journal by `jade-pandora
夏句帳柔肌縛る赤き縄
natu kuchou yawahada shibaru akaki nawa
summer haiku notes-
dressing the supple skin
with a scarlet cord

the image is evocative: the smooth surface of the notebook in skintone accentuates the brilliance of the red cord that guides your eyes down to the poetry book 'manyoushuu' which is filled with romantic and erotic tanka.


:bulletgreen:6/15/09: Changed to a .png file with a higher picture quality - and took out of scrapbook and placed into my gallery proper.

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:iconmoyanii:
oh you are reading from the manyoushuu!

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:iconjade-pandora:
It's amazing, yes! :)

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:iconanavah:
Beautiful!! :heart:

Good luck on the contest! These are lovely.

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:iconlosingmyfaith:
nice angle. i love your handwriting! lol. sounds weird, but it's so prettier than mine hahah. and the haikus are fab (:

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" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
:iconjade-pandora:
aw thank you so much!

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:iconjade-pandora:
Thank you so much...

...and you will surely do well in the contest. :heart:

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:iconlosingmyfaith:
you're most welcome (:

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" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."

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