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1.
winter brilliance  
the milky way
casts a farmer's shadow

2.
his words
crumbs for the ducks
devoured just as quickly

3.
rabbit's fur leans
in the wind, eyes frozen
looking east

4.
arctic storm
inverted umbrellas
harvest the snow

5.
kit foxes
startle a snowshoe rabbit
paisley trails in the frost

6.
winter pardons the wind
to hold its breath
and show mercy

7.
tender shoots slumber
till mother earth gives birth
to suckle at her breast

8.
sad, only by the lack of leaves
that will clothe the trees
when spring returns
©2008-2009 `jade-pandora
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Author's Comments

Since the Haikuwrimo '07, as a reborn haijin, I've relaxed into doing a mixture of randomly written haiku. I organized some of them into several submissions to share in my gallery.

The second submission (erotiku) is here [link]

I hope you the reader will enjoy. Especially those of you who love the simple beauty of the idea and ideal of haiku, tanka, and senryu.

1/14/08: Some small & some major edits that are important, and make me happier about the overall feel of these individual pieces.

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:iconvitoldus:
Simple and yet so complex :thumbsup: and definitely a :+fav:

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:iconetienneell:
another :+fav: for my collection!

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:iconlorananirren:
Who couldn't enjoy? Such simplicity is beautiful, and the topic for these ones in particular is one of my favorites :D Lovely thoughts of nature, I love how they're all put together, and how they're tied together :)

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The void breathed hard on my heart, turning its illusions to ice, shattering them. --Rorschach, Watchmen
:iconjade-pandora:
It's so nice you're back on a more regular basis, i enjoy hearing from you!

And thank you so much for your thoughts on this collection - i do hope you'll also enjoy the next submission which i'll be posting shortly on this lovely Saturday afternoon (though it's now eveningtime where you are).

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:iconjade-pandora:
you're been so wonderfully supportive, dear boy, thank you! :hug:

i hope you'll enjoy the next 'set' coming up soon. :)

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:iconjade-pandora:
Thank you sweetie! :hug:

This batch and the next (which will be posted very soon) are of pieces written randomly yet when i arrange them a certain way they seem to fall quite naturally into a thread that creates an entire singular piece - i love how that just happened without my planning! :D

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:iconlorananirren:
So do I :D You're just too good at what you do ;) And of course you're more than welcome ^_^ :glomp:

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The void breathed hard on my heart, turning its illusions to ice, shattering them. --Rorschach, Watchmen
:iconfinofilka:
I love number 4 most
Great works :)

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:iconjade-pandora:
Thank you, Barka... i've really missed you! :hug:

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