July 31
the north star
two cranes ascend
from a rooftop
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July 30
I can't wait
for your rain
to end this drought
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July 29
open window;
ruffled bed sheets
pressed with longing
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July 28
children ride
a barn-sour horse
to nowhere
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July 27
henge circle;
desert tortoises
beneath a dune
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July 26
silent vigil;
a firefly burns wake-less
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July 25
waning moon;
sweating moonlight
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July 24
my dimple by lamplight
do you see? I ask him
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July 23
pool spiral
slow descent of a beetle
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July 22
new urine
on an inverted leaf
jogging path
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July 21
curry sunset
tabla cadence-
crows street dance
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July 20
phone sex-
car window down
leaves and voices drift in
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July 19
humid air
spread eagle bare;
midday nap
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July 18
for a moment
no loneliness
gazing at your moon
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July 17
windless night
hears my sighs
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July 16
skirt billows-
craned necks of doves
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July 15
merged in spite of distance
which one of us is fuller
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July 14
rising sun
warms the morning glories
I open with them
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July 13
birds scatter;
the shadows
of hot air balloons
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July 12
after all night in ER
the low-slung amber moon
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July 11
my long hair
hides his face
wind chimes
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July 10
milkweed streaks;
a feral cat's
calling card
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July 9
stains from a daydream;
black plums
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July 8
necking
in the pampas grass-
pony rides in the park
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July 7
a hunger-
the summer rumble
of rainless thunder
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July 6
power failure-
night skies brighten
spilling milk and whey
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July 5
warm winds gust-
eucalyptus
drown our sighs
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July 4
clandestine evening
pierced by stars and
the singing of bats
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July 3
late afternoon;
whispers move the air
between us
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July 2
midnight
heat of passion
all the roses have bloomed
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July 1
so austere this tree
a lover's promise
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Comments
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玉: 我的天使 ♥
Always look on the bright side... there's more light there and it's easier to find stuff.
...A tree lasts thousands of years; how long will she wait for a fragile thing like love? Will the love flourish like the cherry blossoms, or will it die a quiet, haijin death?
Can't wait till tomorrow! I'm doing this month's HaikuWriMo, too! Unofficially, but still. I'm kind of nervous! ha, ha!
Good luck to you!
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Holy slag, it's a fraggin JET! Get in the car---HOLY PRIMUS!!
I also love the manner in which the austerity of the tree reflects the simple, but lasting truth of a love which transcends all superficiality. Very nice!
(I have a feeling, between you and Lawrence, I'm going to be swept off my feet often.)
Fantastic start. Loving how, in two lines, you've managed so many layers of meaning.
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玉
i'm so very moved by your response and for what you feel of this, my first piece to the wrimo collection to come. Particularly because you, one of the finest writers of hiaku on dA, took in an unknown, a no-body novice who simply picked up haiku to write for the sheer joy of it, knowing very little about it's structure & form, and nothing of its history - and was totally ignorant of tanka & senryu - and didn't tell her what to do or what to write, but laid open this ancient art and let me breathe it in, letting me learn in my own voice - while you found yourself learning in turn! Truly an honor for me, knowing of your pride...
thank you much.
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玉
i'm very touched how you have embraced so perfectly the meaning of my little piece.
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玉
It's good to hear from you, and how i love your enthusiasm in what i write!
Seriously? You're in the wrimo? But that's wonderful! i look forward to your submissions
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玉
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