1 tanka
the hope of
summer rain vanishes
leaving
a neighbor's dog
to water the roses
2 haiku
heat wave chasing
all the birds and the blues
from the sky
3 tanka
a cloud of gnats
follows
a child's sno-cone
through
the petting zoo
4 haiku/senryu
old mission archway
black birds napping
in ascending order
5 tanka
lunch at the beach,
businessmen strip
and wade into
childhood
6 haiku
looking out to sea
the sky walks a fine line
7 haiku renga
air ballet
on the breakwater...
fishermen and gulls
under the pier
bait in a plastic pail
holding their breath
8 haiku/senryu
still seeking shade,
mating crabs in the shallows
9 haiku
the tang of sea air,
rot of a morning's catch
in my nostrils
10 tanka
old seadog
with his mutt
scans the boardwalk
for smokes
at crack of dawn
11 haiku/senryu
minefield-
jellyfish in the
seaweed washing ashore
12 senryu
beyond the breakers,
shaved heads
and a buoy bobbing
13 haiku
evening star
white-finned boats
sailing into dusk
14 senryu
man-in-the-moon,
revelers of two
at the bonfire
15 tanka
thousands
of silver slivers as
moonlight
erupts from the sand-
the grunion run!
16 haiku
drowning
harbor seals barking
roar of high tide
17 haiku renga
porpoise
sounding offshore
siren song
incoming wave
beached dinghy listing
lullaby
18 tanka
the first day-
he carves their initials
into a piling
while
blue mussels hold fast
19 haiku renga
straw hats & sunscreen
digging
for sand crabs
low tide
bones of driftwood
a jogger leaps!
20 tanka
marshland inlet-
peregrins circle over
empty
black skimmer nests
21 tanka rensaku
children play
under the lifeguard tower
and mistake
the sleeping dog
for kelp
two lifeguards
toss
a lime-green frisbee
while the dog bites
at sand fleas
22 haiku renga
gulls riding updrafts-
the old carnival
tent flap
coming to rest
at tide line
a half-eaten corndog
23 tanka
after
the dune buggy race,
a turtle
emerges
from the tire tracks
24 tanka
in the smoldering
wreck
of a beach bungalow,
I find
a crystal door knob
25 haiku
new moon at twilight
stars raining
into the sea
26 senryu
beyond the reef
scattered ashes
his son's trip to Peru
27 haiku
rainless clouds
white-masted thunder
from the east
28 tanka
before dawn
seasick tourists
below deck,
the day boat bound for
Catalina
29 tanka
bristling with tackle,
the offshore barge...
two boys fish
bare-handed
from the bait tank
30 senryu
a bi-plane's banner
reading backwards
on the sunbathers
31 haiku
sandpipers chasing
the receding gold of day
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Comments
I love the soft alliteration in the second piece.
I look forward to reading more from you, Jade! Keep up the awesome work!
But I'm so glad to see you here first with comments. Did you notice there's two more up?
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Yes!! I love them both as well! I particularly love the third because I love petting zoos; I was actually supposed to go to one yesterday, but I was sleep-deprived and ended up falling asleep around the time I was going to be picked up.
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I can't wait to take in the beginning of your collection, my friend - and don't worry about being playful or irreverent - just see how my collection has started, and will continue! So no worries I say to you, you follow the way you want to go - there's no right or wrong when it comes to the modern haijin. Follow the principles basically, and then forget the rest - just enjoy doing it!
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