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You take me from behind.
Wave after wave anoints me
till the strength of our legs flag,
and the warmth of you overflows

from my greed of wanting all of you,
from hours of endless passion
joined as one until
only exhaustion separates us.

I feel you long after the
physical becomes phantom,
as one feels the itch of a missing limb.
Though your body is spent,

where it leaves off,
your fingers and tongue
push away the phantoms.
Your intent stays earthbound.

My mind drifts cozy in a dream
as my body reacts on its own
from your soft motions, your
after-thought of touch and taste.

Wrapped in the layers of my bed
we are swaddled in clouds of linen
where angels would make love
if only they could.
©2007-2009 `jade-pandora
:iconjade-pandora:

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Sept 23, 2008: small edits

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:iconjake10684:
Another beautiful poem Jade. And it looks as though someone was up pretty late too... ;p

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:iconsanguinarii:
This is absolutely breathtaking. There is so much passion brought forth in these words. :heart:

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Vampires suck. :furious:
:iconholycheet:
Amazing...I was drawn in from the beginning.
^___^ Great job.
:iconjade-pandora:
you're too kind!

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:iconjade-pandora:
i'm glad when my writing succeeds in doing that, and lets you feel something of my mind. Thank you for your comment. :)

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:iconjade-pandora:
The passion is very real :hug:....

and thank you for letting my words take your breath away! :heart:

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