Act I
the fever hit quickly
it always did-
his lust compelled
brought her to him
wrapped in a rug
sans a compass
to moor within her,
astounded by the song
that played off her pelvis
with his semen
he swooned
taking her into himself,
wanting it completely-
his third eye in orbit
seeing nothing else
needing nothing more
and famished
for everything-
to pine as if
pining was lust
Act II
an open window,
lent inwards to the
weep of a violin
playing once through
and never again
the talent
of his consumption
for her
for a heartbeat,
a virginal moment
not to question,
with mind at rest
and body floating-
unflinchingly
in denial
lure of a dark cry-
he could not turn to her
nor could he let go
this perversion, where
air thins till there's none
Act III
trembling
at the mercy
of his lover,
there was no grace
and none sought
orgasmic
words and thoughts,
erotic intellect
flowed-
anonymous art
his fingers,
tight within
the leaking chink
to staunch the flow
but never tried
the irony
was not lost
how it ended,
drawing out more
than one fathomed














Comments
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玉: 我的天使 ♥
Always look on the bright side... there's more light there and it's easier to find stuff.
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etienne ell
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browse me/know me
I think (and stop me from doing this in the future if you mind) that the word "thoughts" could be depluralized to "thought" to achieve the same kind of bond--the one I mentioned above with "orbit" and "more" (that I liked)--with the word "sought." I guess it would be a different bond, though. It is the sound I like, with the "or--," and "mor-," and perhaps it is too with the hard "t" end of the second pair--ah well, I know nothing--just a thought.
crazy brilliant poem! I'd like to hear it read in a sexy jazz voice.
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browse me/know me
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"Men like me because of whats in my brassiere and what i seem to think .
Women like me because I don\'t look like a girl
who would steal a husband. At least not for long.\"
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Life is an adventure in forgiveness.
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I Don't Need No Help,I Can Do Bad on My OwN
Leave Me Lonely,Like You Did Last Time...
everything i write is always personal -- always.
April and i were kind to each other
i really appreciate your words, and tanka definately is a form i've taken to, it flows from me!
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玉
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玉
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