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making our way, unhurried
past tumble-down walls leaning
against cork oak trees, and
covered with lampshade poppies,
we stroll from the open-air market
with its baskets of persimmons-

the Moorish sun of late afternoon
burns us both brown, obscuring
the winter of my scars-
our half-nude bodies celebrate
while each toe excavates
treasures from a sandy beach

leaving a path that fades
from the lapping of waves
that lie across our footsteps
in languid foreplay-
distant harbor lights offer
shimmering pearl necklaces

and the promise, as evening falls
to indulge in the warmth
of a shared glass of Madeira,
of wine-stained random kisses,
and the religion of a
star-filled Portuguese night

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April 10, 2009
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`FuzzyHoser May 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Splendid work on the imagery..
And it has a delightful carefree feeling to it.

I like this a lot.
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:iconjade-pandora:
:hug: why thank you, Fuzzy. <3
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:iconfuzzyhoser:
`FuzzyHoser May 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're more than welcome. :hug:
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~DamagedHomewrecker May 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i really love the imagery; the rhythm is like a slow waterfall. i love it.
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:iconjade-pandora:
Thank you! I'm so very glad. <3
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:iconbeeinthebottle:
I forgot to mention...I love how the language in this piece flows, as well. Beautifully done.
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:iconjade-pandora:
I thank you for coming to read and give me your thoughts - I'm very glad that you find it so.
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:iconbeeinthebottle:
:wow: Lovely imagery in this!
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:iconjade-pandora:
:hug: Thank you, you don't know how much that means to me.
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:iconbeeinthebottle:
My pleasure. :hug:
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