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Running barefoot down
narrow paths sodden by
a deafening downpour
through mangroves and palms
in this land where
no corn grows, and
sugar cane rows blind the view
from un-tilled slopes of
low-slung emerald hills.
I don't recognize the rain,
it smells of volcanic ash
and sea salt burning
as I search for the stain
hopelessly trodden,
changing its course.
If only I could find a tree
that bears familiar fruit,
and see colors or hear sounds
that point me to you,
but I'm a stranger.
This path wends to the shore
where the island comes full circle,
offering dead things in the sand
and no escape
because you're not here.
I return to the fields
as rain fades green to grey
where no one else goes,
and I pray the way
back to you will be
in an armful of mangoes.
narrow paths sodden by
a deafening downpour
through mangroves and palms
in this land where
no corn grows, and
sugar cane rows blind the view
from un-tilled slopes of
low-slung emerald hills.
I don't recognize the rain,
it smells of volcanic ash
and sea salt burning
as I search for the stain
hopelessly trodden,
changing its course.
If only I could find a tree
that bears familiar fruit,
and see colors or hear sounds
that point me to you,
but I'm a stranger.
This path wends to the shore
where the island comes full circle,
offering dead things in the sand
and no escape
because you're not here.
I return to the fields
as rain fades green to grey
where no one else goes,
and I pray the way
back to you will be
in an armful of mangoes.
Literature
Your Roofies
I took the flowers from your stone, ripped off their heads
and braided them into my curls.
partly because you didn't deserve them,
mostly because you'd always loved being in my hair.
I know who you are.
you're me, or something like it.
and I knew who you were,
but not really.
a contradiction,
scourged with a pulse.
the only way out
is the way we came in,
and we've been here so long
that that path is gone.
remind me to give you the next thing
I plan on losing.
letting go is the hardest thing
I have ever done.
I think that's why
I haven't yet.
Literature
parentheses
i was going to ask you to hold back my hair
if i started to heave
but it's cut in mourning
for the fawns dying under the chalky
moist hands of children,
in mourning for newspaper print
threatening suicide off the tips of your eyelashes,
saying things like
i could fall faster
i could convert more
i could shine my face brighter than your sands
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summer-boy and such: early musings
i dream of night-lit lonely beaches at the cusp where
summer tips over into autumn and the stars won't stay in one place and
there's a telltale chill in the air and college kids and fires guarding
our shores from the tide,
of a boy with soft brown curls
spilling down the nape of his neck: a fire-bright boy with glow-gold
eyelashes and burnished eyes and lightning smiles and
out-of-step tangos to mandolin ballads and shards of bottles and spills of stale wine and
brazen skies all storm-edged and
things i'd do if i couldn't regret, and
winter comes, summerlover, and i dream
of you.
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2/2/10: The results at last are in - the poem placed first. ^.^
9/25/09: I have entered this piece in `Flutterings' 13th poetry competition, "weather" [link]
9/25/09: I have entered this piece in `Flutterings' 13th poetry competition, "weather" [link]
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Awww. Sadness. And happiness that this excellent poem won in competition. It tells an achingly beautiful story, and paints a native landscape in colors and tones believable, even when those colors are muted by the lack of someone you love being near.
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