Maybe yes..



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I would definitely give up everything to be with you, in another world or on this one, in your country or in another one, as long as we'll be together...

Your poem is wonderful, it is delicately written, like if you had been encarving some stylistic patterns upon a seashell, it feels so natural to me and it reminds me of who you are to me and what you mean in my life

It reminds me of the soothing music of the waves softly lying on the sand, of all this years in my life spent on the seashore, or sitting on the rocks, looking at the horizon, hoping for the unknown, hoping for something I thought would never come true and yet now that you are here, becomes a reason to believe in a brighter future, in clearer skies, and I can't help to find myself envisioning us together on sitting upon a rock, in Monte-Carlo, looking at the horizon & the city lights, while the day fades and the nights begin... it's autumn and a soft cold breeze pushes our warm-dressed bodies to snuggle in even closer.

I have found a woman who is an artist, who has extended my vision, who took my hand, held it and made me discover I could write, a lover that made me realize I am an adult man, and a tender friend who made me wish I will be a father one day.

For all of this I love you, my darling, and for many more reasons.
It is an honor to me to say this publically at your site, for all to be known.

I love you, mon coeur

You've got one heck of a man there, congrats! I would indeed, and if all goes well I plan to do so in my somewhat distant future. *sigh* I must keep my patience steady and my hopes alive. Its hard, but its worth it. Beautiful work as always. I was a bit put off by the beginning rhyme scheme being disrupted, but that's a trifle that's easy to overlook hee hee

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The void breathed hard on my heart, turning its illusions to ice, shattering them. --Rorschach, Watchmen

I love the ocean and this poem is just great

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...His harp was carved and cunning...
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I would only be abel to give uyp my world for someone if they were the right somone. ::smiles sadly::

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this makes you feel as iff u can hear the waves crashing on the sand.... just wonderful. and yes i would give everything up to people with that person who was unlike me

Thank you, dear friend.

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_{Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.}

Even though we speak to each other often, i try to say something different to such words of dedication as these you've given me here, and days go by because i say my reply to you personally, but i want desperately to give you a proper response here for you and still the words evade me.

i'm moved with all you've said, and i feel so much the same for you as you do for me.

This poem inparticular was so wonderful to write, and it too means alot to me. And when i say 'another world', i mean that in every sense one can imagine. You and i, we live in different worlds on the same planet, but we are so connected. The poem is about turning one's back on the familiar for the foreign, if that's what it takes.

je t'aime, mon coeur

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_{Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.}

i'm so glad for you dear, and hope that all goes well. Waiting is often part of the process. Sometimes cutting it short to leave all you know for the unknown is part of an equation that we have no control over. Plan as you might, sometimes you end up diving in feet first. It's scary & mystical & wonderful & something everyone should experience at least once in their lifetime.

As for the poem, yes i deliberately did the first stanza in fixed rhyme as a way to portray things going along in a normal sense before the 'sighting', and before everything changed. And then i do something that i recently found a term for!

i told Max i know have a term (made up by me so i don't know if it's an actual term for what i write or how i write), and i call it "wrap-around rythme". i got excited when it came to me because that's exactly my style in most cases. So when i do a fixed stanza, it conveys a pace, a mood. You yourself have recognized this on your own and pointed it out to me, to my delight btw.

And i bet i don't even need to explain what i mean by "wrap-around rythme". At least not to you because you have a keen perception and i really appreciate this. i'm unorthodox in how i mix things up too as you know now so well.

To be continued if you like... i must get to bed now!

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_{Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.}

i'm so glad you enjoy it, and thank you!

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_{Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.}