"Remains"
bringing you to me
on a skiff,
the delta hums with insects
while the equinox rises
over your shoulder-
unable to hide
promises already broken,
we stand barefoot on
the muddy shoreline
to be married in a dream-
bones of driftwood,
moreso ancient, lie close
to my carnelian thighs
as we wait impatiently
for the charred remains of night
that seem distant from
the moment at hand -
of your gypsy with
eyes of obsidian
and mother-of-pearl
yet now is the hour;
tremors shift the lapis sand
between us - a short distance.
hardly any distance at all.
only closeness really-
the ellipse of our eyes
begging for the blinding
whitewash of camellias-
of crinoline and bone,
to ambush the honeymoon
till you distance yourself from
the aging stigmata of the past-
when all will go drowsy,
and our consummation will
lay your servitude to rest















Comments
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THIS IS THE GATE OF HEAVEN. ENTER YE ALL BY THIS DOOR. (This door is kept locked because of the draught - please use side door.)
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玉
That aside I felt the poem as a whole was very rich in atmosphere - exotic.
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THIS IS THE GATE OF HEAVEN. ENTER YE ALL BY THIS DOOR. (This door is kept locked because of the draught - please use side door.)
I knew it wasn't possible to explain the meanings when I posted the poem, but that's how it is with many of my works -- and what I always hope for is that other readers will get something of their own -- their own interpretations.
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玉
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" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
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玉
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THIS IS THE GATE OF HEAVEN. ENTER YE ALL BY THIS DOOR. (This door is kept locked because of the draught - please use side door.)
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THIS IS THE GATE OF HEAVEN. ENTER YE ALL BY THIS DOOR. (This door is kept locked because of the draught - please use side door.)
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" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
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