-1-
drama in the park
she throws his napsack-
butterfly t-shirts
-2-
imported apples-
a dog's
peace offering
-3-
zoo trip-
baboon curls his lip
at me
-4-
pet rat
fat and content
with its short life
-5-
from an air duct
desperately
seeking cricket
-6-
weeding-
depopulation from
strangulation
-7-
dogs in the park
dressed for the runway-
weekend walkies
-8-
suddenly
the sound of wings-
going so soon?














Comments
A great warm-up for the WriMo, Jade!
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玉: 我的天使 ♥
Always look on the bright side... there's more light there and it's easier to find stuff.
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~secret study~
~silent studio~
I'm still learning about senryu, tanka and haiku, but perhaps I should give it a try.
For what is worth, I really like number three and its littlle 2-5-2 lines. Can't help but smile
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Dangers of Poetry:
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玉
i'm happy, too... thank you so very much!
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玉
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玉
thank you so very much!
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玉
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