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Slave by *jade-pandora:iconjade-pandora:



"I am slave to your love",
Said he with a tear on his lips,
"I am not worthy of that love",
As his hand trembled across her hips.

She looked over to smile,
Then drew a finger upon his chin.
They laid side by side a while,
Til she reached down and held him.

He moaned in spite of his resolve,
And surrendered to her touch.
Her hand coaxed from him all
That she craved for so much,

And all that he longed to give her,
Without denial, as long as he lived.
He never wanted to leave her,
As long as she would have him.

She was no illusion, but was his dream.
Yet her need for him was just as great
As anything he felt for her it seemed.
And if it took forever, they would wait.

"But how lovely, how beautiful you are.
What have I done to earn the right to let go,
For I desire no one else, however near or far,
And will die for you." It would always be so.
©2005-2008 *jade-pandora
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~inklover:iconinklover: Aug 21, 2005, 11:17:49 PM
mmmm what a beautiful poem of dedication to a person, so highly esteemed above all.....what can i say, i love your writing :heart: thanks so much.....for imparting your heart to us....:kiss:

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:kiss:"cemetery of kisses, there is still fire in your tombs" :kiss: Pablo Neruda
*jade-pandora:iconjade-pandora: Aug 24, 2005, 3:07:00 AM
That's so wonderfully kind of you to say... thanks so much! :hug:

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I am Lit', therefore, I am!
~inklover:iconinklover: Aug 24, 2005, 4:41:13 AM
:kiss: :hug:

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:kiss:"cemetery of kisses, there is still fire in your tombs" :kiss: Pablo Neruda
~forgottenforever7:iconforgottenforever7: Aug 25, 2005, 8:46:19 PM
I love this... very well written!

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"Drama is life, with the dull bits left out." -Alfred Hitchcock
*jade-pandora:iconjade-pandora: Aug 25, 2005, 11:13:15 PM
Thank you very much, i appreciate you taking the time to read it and tell me so.

i hope you'll come visit me again soon.

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I am Lit', therefore, I am!
~forgottenforever7:iconforgottenforever7: Aug 26, 2005, 5:54:42 PM
no prob... as soon as I get some stuff up to .. take a look at mine too! :) Its taking me forever to write stuff for some reason.

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"Drama is life, with the dull bits left out." -Alfred Hitchcock
~Isista:iconIsista: Sep 15, 2005, 6:51:24 PM
i love this! definately a :+fav:

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Love is not blind - It sees more and not less,
but because it sees more it is willing to see less.

- Will Moss -

Love isn't blind; it just only sees what matters.

- William Curry -
*jade-pandora:iconjade-pandora: Sep 25, 2005, 12:33:29 AM
Thank you for your enthusiasm towards my works! :blowkiss:

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I am Lit', therefore, I am!
~Isista:iconIsista: Sep 25, 2005, 2:05:38 PM
oh you're welcome ^^

--
Love is not blind - It sees more and not less,
but because it sees more it is willing to see less.

- Will Moss -

Love isn't blind; it just only sees what matters.

- William Curry -