the sinus drip
of stifling air
and filthy windows,
we sip on humidity
hiding in a
truck stop bathroom
the heat, the sweat-
flies are sucked
down a drain
his skin gives off
the smell
of a tattoo
and I recognize
this puma is no ink blot
just a thimble-full
can burn my eyes
I bare my teeth, to
have him here right now
a cracked mirror
fractures the image
showing the act
multiple times, as
more than one of him
I don't care
at this moment, when
he presses my back
to the floor
and I'm just as wet
©2008-2009 `jade-pandora
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This is actually a linked tanka piece (rensaku), that was born of the 2nd tanka in the link which is initially from my April Tanka Collection [link] . It wasn't long before I felt more of the emotion of that piece and fleshed it out into a steamy decadent linked tanka (both 5 & 4-line).
It has much the same feeling for me as my previous long poem, "Choir Practice" [link] .
It has much the same feeling for me as my previous long poem, "Choir Practice" [link] .
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Oh, oh, I am so happy you posted it! Thank you! It's always an adventure, exploring your works....you almost have your own, personal world you write about, with its own special ideals and emotions.
Wonderful!
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Holy slag, it's a fraggin JET! Get in the car---HOLY PRIMUS!!
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Life is an adventure in forgiveness.
...and as usual, my words don't begin to do justice to your work.
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ヒスイ:私の天使 ♥
Always look on the bright side... there's more light there and it's easier to find stuff.
...thank you for feeling it too.
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Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.
the roughness doubled by the multi-images, the intensity of lust taken up several notches!
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Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.
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Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.
Special ideals & emotions... mmmm... yes, i write what is my world, and those who follow are also able to join me.
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Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.
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May the fire from my pen scorch the skin of hades.
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