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:bulletred: 07/06/09: My piece received 4th place - honorable mention!

My entry for *moyanII's visual poetry contest where she has asked for submissions of haijins' journals, notes - something to show their handwritten haiku work.

You see one of my working poetry journals which is open to some of the haiku that I wrote for the spring haikuthon in March 2008 [link] .

The setting - a cafe within an establishment where many a writer, including myself, takes refuge to collect their thoughts & inspirations while having a cup of coffee or tea. This is my favorite table when I come here.

The haiku that are seen on the open pages of the journal:

snow melts-
bones of winter
grin from the grass

scalloped leaves-
a caterpillar's
overbite

dream catchers
at dawn's first light-
cocoon remnants

morning dew-
ladybug
reflections

sun bonnets in vogue-
a bee attends
high tea

curbside run-off
graceful silhouette
the flight of a crane

wasp nest
in my mailbox-
unpaid bills

daybreak-
empty and unbroken
a lone snail shell

bathroom window
moonlight
voyeur

freshly washed hair
drying in the spring air-
I think of him

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:iconlosingmyfaith:
very nice (:

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" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
:iconaqua-rat:
What a lovely calm spot! I like the book and the cup on the table. It sets it off nicely. Not only do we see your work but where you work as well.

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THIS IS THE GATE OF HEAVEN. ENTER YE ALL BY THIS DOOR. (This door is kept locked because of the draught - please use side door.)
:iconformel:
Pretty journal, wish I was that organised. I call the method the "orderly chaos" :giggle:
You have interesting hand writing :)

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Alucard: I had one man tell me he was a writer.
Integra: And what did you do?
A: I killed him quickly.
I: I'm sure the art community thanked you.
A: I like to consider myself a scathing critic. Non of my subjects survive my reviews.

:D
:iconformel:
I mean MY method. ^^;

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Alucard: I had one man tell me he was a writer.
Integra: And what did you do?
A: I killed him quickly.
I: I'm sure the art community thanked you.
A: I like to consider myself a scathing critic. Non of my subjects survive my reviews.

:D
:iconmoyanii:
i see that you are a fan of sweet and pretty things.
i remember the little notepad you gifted me last year. it was kept it in my treasure box of pretty stationery and i don't know when will i ever bear to start using it. :)

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~secret study~
~silent studio~
:iconkatiewings:
How inspiring! It certainly makes me want to write just looking at it :)

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Holy slag, it's a fraggin JET! Get in the car---HOLY PRIMUS!! :noes:
:iconsynconi:
A couple of books, a mug of hot coffee and a pen and pad...what more could you want? Your handwriting is beautiful! :heart:

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:giggle: Smile...It confuses people.
:iconadriennelmalohne:
Hay awesome. How are you doing. Is your leg healed. Have a wonderful week.

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"Not too far away is this burden of mine."
:iconrlkirkland:
Here I am just laughing at myself :laughing: because I can't even read my own handwriting.
I have to print anything I want myself or others to read.
(Thank heavens for word processors.):D

You on the other hand do beautiful work. :flowerpot:

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People are Important - Goals much less
When we stop learning we have begun to die - Shamelessly Purloined
:iconbogbrush:
Ah, a cafe - the best place to write :)

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Ethics? That's the place north of London init?

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