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Come lick the pretty purple
of forbidden fruit that
I hold to your lips.

Remember the shape
you love, to kneel
and feel. So bold am I

to place it forcefully
between your thighs-
your hips cannot lie.

Only the truth is
what you give to me-
to yourself as well as I.

Delve deep and take the
evidence of that truth,
speaking not a word,

but heard as you sigh.
And once again I
offer to your mouth, for

a taste of this plum,
made sweeter all the more
by what it glistens from.
©2006-2009 `jade-pandora
:iconjade-pandora:

Author's Comments

Just when you thought I had gone all... pastoral.

:bulletpurple: 06/15/09: originally written in '06 for a collaborative book with `kentsoul, which might still come to fruition in the near future

:bulletpurple: 06/27/09: formatting update

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:iconlorananirren:
WOOT! yay for mixing it up heehee...wow, i really like this imagery, amazingly well written...kinky to the max ;P Makes me think of memories....*sigh* I can hardly wait xD

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The void breathed hard on my heart, turning its illusions to ice, shattering them. --Rorschach, Watchmen
:iconjade-pandora:
Memories, eh? *wiggles her eyebrows* Now this is worth a 'note' to me for clarification! ;P

And thank you for your comments, what a great reception!

:glomp:

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:iconjade-pandora:
*chuckles*:giggle: let me try that again...

Memories, eh? *wiggles her eyebrows* Now this is worth a 'note' to me for clarification! ;p

And thank you for your comments, what a great reception!

:glomp:

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:iconwebspider56:
I like your kink. After looking at the link I see that I was mistaken in thinking this was a woman writing from a man's perspective, but you have to love that about art! I look forward to more.

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“Human folly does not impede the turning of the stars.”
Tom Robbins
:iconlorananirren:
Heehee, no kiss and tell stories from me, sorry xD

And you're most welcome, great reception is the only way to respond to great poetry :D

:hug:

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The void breathed hard on my heart, turning its illusions to ice, shattering them. --Rorschach, Watchmen
:iconjade-pandora:
Thank you so much for your comments about this piece, it's much appreciated, and yes indeed i absolutely adore this about art.

Btw, while you look forward to more, i invite you to go into my gallery where i have many more kink poems that are linked with the same photographer (though many don't have the links themselves to view the object of my words because usually the poems can stand on their own, or it's to avoid the mature content label so that more can access for a good read)...

and many of those, plus others of my poetry collection have varied gender perspectives. i write from the male point of view almost as often as i do the female... and also from dominant male/female & submissive male/female when it applies to the subject.

What some understand but other newer readers of my works may not realize is that all of my poetry, no matter how it reads and from what perspective or gender... is all from me, about me, my sexuality, how i feel, think, live, perceive, dream & fantasize.

Whew, sorry for the long-winded response, but i hope it also shed more light on the kind of poet i am.

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:iconwebspider56:
I could very easily have written this to you. I too write from many perspectives and it has often been the case that I've written from a female perspective. It has often been the case that I wonder what it is like to walk in someone else' shoes (or restraints as it were). I hope you can find the time to read and comment on some of mine. I enjoy your work very much.

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“Human folly does not impede the turning of the stars.”
Tom Robbins
:iconlycen:
phewph, this is kink and so strange as I wrote a similar one the other day, but didnt think it was good enough to be posted yet. I love the way it can be interpreted two different ways , did u mean to write it like that?

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| So Wait Up, I'm Not Sleeping Alone Again Tonight... |

...There's so much to dream about, there must be more to my life.


| I Am The Scarlett Wolf Hear Me Growl *Rawr* ^^ |


:hug: I Love Hugs!


:iconjade-pandora:
aahhh, be sure that i will indeed read & comment on your work. i'm moved by your generosity & appreciation of mine. Thank you so much.

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