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What will you do when the
tides sieze and come to rest,
and the gulls all fly away.

Where will you be when the
last ocean shivers on the last day,
and the skies cloud over forever,

suffocating the sun, and
holds life at bay in a season
lost from one of its pages.

How will you feel when finally
I forsake you to your fate,
to the untold ages - and yet...

what if I stay.
:iconjade-pandora:
i was inspired by yet another photo, this time by another photographer on my devWatch. i simply added it as part of my comment to `ssilence's deviation "What If I Stay" [link]

As you can see, i've since posted the piece properly here to stand on its own.
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:icondisrhythmic:
Bloody gorgeous imagery. Love it. :D
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:iconjade-pandora:
Why thank you, stranger! :hug:
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:icondisrhythmic:
My pleasure. ^^
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:iconjanoera:
~Janoera Dec 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
and the skies cloud over forever,
suffocating the sun,

I like this line. You make an eternal cloudy day seem extremely ominous :love:
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:icon0hgravity:
*0hgravity Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
The last line really ties it all together nicely. I liked the third stanza the most.
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:iconjade-pandora:
Thank you so very much, I really appreciate you giving me your thoughts on my piece. <3
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:icon0hgravity:
*0hgravity Dec 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome!
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:iconhtblack:
Your descriptions seriously are always unique and beautiful.

The end is perfect. :heart:
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